Saturday, September 21, 2013

Blog #6 Compound Sentences

(Part of an essay on the Women Warriors of China)


The idealized legends of Mulan and other Chinese women warriors contrast sharply to the more historically true story of Lady Yang. The legends have found a comfortable niche among the history of China; their stories are passed down through stories, plays, poems, and continue to play an important role in the Chinese culture. Mothers tell their daughters of the dutiful Mulan and the loyal Mu Guiying. Their reflections of Confucian ideals secure their place and their acceptance among the people of China, FOR many of them are viewed as well-loved heroes of China (COMPOUND SENTENCE WITH COMMA). Young girls look up to these warriors; FOR they show them the importance of the Confucian ideals, while giving them hope that one day they will be called forth to be a woman warrior of China (COMPOUND SENTENCE WITH SEMICOLON). YET Lady Yang remains a shadow -- her history and legacy left mostly to the dry pages of books (SENTENCE THAT BEGINS WITH FANBOY). Because she does not fit into an acceptable role, she is excluded from the popularity and recognition of her fellow Chinese women warriors. Her power, her choice to commit adultery, and her unconventional role as a leader kept her from encompassing the ideals that the legends such as Mulan were able to project despite being warriors. From these viewpoints one can see how the legends play a far larger role in Chinese society than the women warriors whose stories have not been turned into a myth. Despite the fact that Lady Yang is portrayed more accurately than her legendary counterparts, it the legends that will continue to play a larger role in the society of China. The Confucian ideals that allow them to be accepted in society give them a stronger hold in the culture than the less fabricated stories where the actions of the woman challenge Confucian ideals. 

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